Tuesday, October 28, 2008

OPEN WIDE...A POEM

His voice alone
opens me

opens me wide
without touch,
kiss

distance

his voice alone
whispers to my heart
delights

soothes

seduces...

My senses are intuned
to his breathing
thinking

knowing

his voice opens me
wide

I wait.

*dedicated to my Crush

11 comments:

nikki said...

OWEEEE! i likes this one.

btw, it's aiight for you to post the series from my blog. i wasn't sure how to contact you. :)

CapCity said...

Go 'head, Sistah Babz!

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

THANKS Nikki!

I am so delighted that we can post it here! YOu are an amazing talent!

Capcity!
Just trying to hang in with the *true* poets...LOL!

Anonymous said...

yeah go ahead girl!

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

folk must be some fi'e jones

Anonymous said...

Nicely done...very sensual.

Monique said...

That one helluva crush. I love it.

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Thank you Chic Decore!

Thank you Torrance
He is in deed very fine, fierce and humble.

Thank you LisaQ,
I was feeling very sensual when he wrote it.

Thank you Monique,
Yes it is and I like it for now. Crushes don't require you to do anything. YOu can declare love or say nothing...do nothing.

Shannon said...

very nice Babz, very nice indeed

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Thank you Shannon,

Thank you very much!

Anonymous said...

* dap *