Friday, June 27, 2008

THE MUNDANE IS SEXY...

I look forward to talking to him late at night.

My pussy swells in anticipation. I touch myself ever so gently. The wetness is sweet and sticky. I love the way I feel when its like that. I like the lingering scent on my fingers... I want him. I've wanted him for a long time. I imagine him moving around me and to me and in me. I anticipate him taking me in ways unlike anything I have ever known. My desire for him overwhelms me. He is amazing. As I think about the upcoming encounter I am giddy, drunk even, with desire and joy and sexiness.

He wants me I think. I want him I know.

The days are whizzing by and my desire for him grows. Does he feel the same way. I have no idea, our conversations give nothing away. We talk as though we are old friends...we are. And yet there is desire... He has to know that I ache for him. How could he not not know he is My Crush.

Does this sound like a love missive?...yes indeed. Most times our conversations are mundane...the every day experiences of folks raising children, having faith, living dreams. For me, the mundane is sexy. The ordinary is extraordinary and the idea of him touching me is nirvana.

Sometimes the conversation is erotic and we talk ourselves to orgasm. I listen to him direct my hands with the sound of his voice. I lower my voice and speak ever so softly over the phone... whispering I feel you, I want you, cum for me. I hear his breathing quicken and the intensity of the moment captures us and takes over. The waves sweep me out to sea and I am floating.

I am spent. He is spent.

We whisper goodnight.

15 comments:

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Jinkees! This is my first attempt at writing erotica. I am writing from a very personal place. I would really like to get into writing in this vein. I love erotica. I want to be tasteful and authentic.

I hope you like it.

Xave said...

Love,

You didn't have to tell me where this is coming from. I know exactly where because I could feel it. That authentic feel is what separates the writing haves from the have-nots. You, my precious LoveBabz, are clearly in the haves column. But the twist is that now you have more than just talent; you also have my full attention. When can I expect more from you?

Peace and Love

Alizé

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Alize,
You are too kind! I appreciate the support and the high compliment. Yes indeed there will be more to come...as the inspiration flows.

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

nice
nice
i can see it
nothing like phone sex
only the real is better

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Thanks Torrance, I am glad you liked it!

Yes you are right phone sex is nice, but the real thing is divine!

A.u.n.t. Jackie said...

i haven't phone sex is ages...

ah something so sweet about a sharing a moment with yourself. with someone...

great job with the erotica..

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Thank you so much Aunt Jackie!

If you would like to join us, email me and we will add you. Or you can just hang out!

The Second Sixty-Eight said...

Um... If the inspiration stops flowing for some reason. I will call you! BUT You can't say "Jinkees!" Unless you are actually wearing the orange sweater and the coke bottles... Of course that might get something started too!

Sharon shares said...

I loved this sistah Babz! It was such a real and personally identifiable experience that it feels like I wrote it myself. At the same time, on no level did I feel as if I should be embarrassed nor as if I was eaves dropping on someone elses fantasy. I guess that makes you potentially a very good writer of erotica seeing as you made your "very personal" (by your own definition) experience mine too!

Don't put down your "pen"...you're on to something big here :)

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Hey Second Sixty-Eight,
You called me out...Josie and The Pussy Cats! Yes I am OLD SCHOOL!

And double thanks for the review on your blog! Very kind of you! We appreciate the support...truly!

Sharon,
Thank you very much! I am so glad you feel the way you do. I like it but I wasn't sure if folks would respond to it.

The pen is poised to keep writing!

Ms Smack said...

HOT HOT HOT. This is your first attempt? Woman, keep writing. You're a natural.

Wonderful piece!

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Coming from you Ms. Smack is a high compliment indeed. Thank you. I suspect as I keep writing my hope is to get better at it.

Lance said...

wow, nice work luvey, now you're not a erotica virgin anymore..heh-heh

this reminds me of my forays of phone sex, while driving at night at 80mph and trying to jack-off at the same time.

yes, my people, i'm multi-taskin'...lol

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

LOL LOL!

Lance you are too much! I am glad you like my virgin piece!

...multi-tasking indeed! LOL!

CapCity said...

Sistah LOVE - I KNEW there was a writer in u that u've been hiding!! KEEP it cummin', Sis!

Lance - u r a dayum fool! LOLOLOL!! please don't crash in that position. LOL!